I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Ka mau te wehi, awesome effort on your poems Murray! I LOVE your "Tasteless" acrostic poem and how it touches on the theme of global warming. You've also used some nice rhyme and alliteration in there. Well done!
Tena koe Murray, It's Ruqayat your classmate. I really like your poems, especially your tasteless acrostic poems. It was as if you were reading you were reading a story.I also like the descriptive words you used. Ka pai Murray!
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Ka mau te wehi, awesome effort on your poems Murray! I LOVE your "Tasteless" acrostic poem and how it touches on the theme of global warming. You've also used some nice rhyme and alliteration in there. Well done!
ReplyDeleteTena koe Murray, It's Ruqayat your classmate. I really like your poems, especially your tasteless acrostic poems. It was as if you were reading you were reading a story.I also like the descriptive words you used. Ka pai Murray!
ReplyDeleteYours Truly ~
Ruqayat