I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Murray,Its cool reading your lock down capsule,maybe next time proof read it so you can make sure there spelled right,by the way your cooking turned out into caking.by jimmy&Fraise
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Murray,Its cool reading your lock down capsule,maybe next time proof read it so you can make sure there spelled right,by the way your cooking turned out into caking.by jimmy&Fraise
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