I am a Year 7 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora Murray, thank you for sharing your report about France in the Olympics! What is your favourite Olympic sport to watch? Next time I would like you to proofread your work for capital letters and full stops before you publish.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughul - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora Murray, thank you for sharing your report about France in the Olympics! What is your favourite Olympic sport to watch? Next time I would like you to proofread your work for capital letters and full stops before you publish.
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